been writing
Mar. 5th, 2006 10:35 pmthe muse of ignominy misappropriated my brane last night, and i've been writing ever since, except for too few hours of sleep. thus, if you've got the stomach for it, you are welcome to read a partial draft of what's turning out to be a much longer, more involved Harry/Draco story than i ever anticipated. no actual descriptions of sexual acts, i promise, although they are mentioned, along with a fair bit of torture and a truly staggering amount of sarcasm.
constructive criticism would be most appreciated -- the story is meant to be quite scattered, to reflect the character's voice, which is a familiar style for me anyway. this one definitely pushes the envelope, though, so i'd like to know if it's too difficult to follow. britpicking is also welcomed -- it's pretty rough yet, and i'm sure it's still rife with flagrant Americanisms (and/or misused Britishisms) that need weeding out.
you can find it in my not-so-secret fanfic lj: http://maudite_a_deux.livejournal.com/10645.html
constructive criticism would be most appreciated -- the story is meant to be quite scattered, to reflect the character's voice, which is a familiar style for me anyway. this one definitely pushes the envelope, though, so i'd like to know if it's too difficult to follow. britpicking is also welcomed -- it's pretty rough yet, and i'm sure it's still rife with flagrant Americanisms (and/or misused Britishisms) that need weeding out.
you can find it in my not-so-secret fanfic lj: http://maudite_a_deux.livejournal.com/10645.html